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Adhoori Kavita

I came up with the first stanza of this poem over 20 years ago, but have never been able to finish it. I'm posting it online here in the hope that inspiration may strike me again and allow me to finish it. Or someone who is lost on the internet and stumbles upon my blog and this note may be able to help me finish it!

Note that it's part Hindi and part English - Hinglish, if you will!

Here goes:

Adhoori Kavita
Hum Ne Jab Dil Diya ...

Maloom tha ki aage Uphill Task hai
Pyar karna Skill aur Strong Will ki baat hai
Pyar mein Success Thrill hai,
To Failure ek Bitter Pill hai

Phir Bhi Humne Dil Diya ...
...
???

------
Help!

[Originally posted on my personal blog at muralikd.blogspot.com, August 25, 2009]

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